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A single breath was never meant to be
an illusion of eternity
Taken in and released with a sigh
what's the future hold for you or I?

These are things not meant to know
They're only things that time will show.
I find some patience deep inside
I find a blade addressed for pride

I find the things I know are true
I find my faith inside of you
As dark as my mind makes things be
you remind me of that light in me

Sometimes there's things I just can't show
sometimes there's things you need to know
Sometimes it seems that I can't speak
sometimes I feel I am too weak.

In my head the needs consume
but none as much as need for you
And if by chance, you can not see
I'm the one I used to be...

Somewhere inside there lies an elf
stuffed with dust on hidden shelf
The light inside that none can see
that light she holds because of me

And you saw through the way she plays
and made that love take hold and stay
You looked deeply into her eyes
and saw I am the one inside

How many times you've saved me, dear...
by talking through my petty fears
I know there's things I can not say or show
by day by day my feelings grow

I love you more than you can see
you are my living destiny
You are the one that made me hear
I am the reason you are near

You are my strength when I can't stand
You are my love, my light... my man.
So please remember that it's true
there is no end of love... for you.
©2006-2009 ~SalvationForSanity
:iconsalvationforsanity:

Author's Comments

Hehe. I gave this one to my boyo today. I know I havent written anything for a while, and it's kinda rusty, but it's something, eh?

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:icononlyifyousmile:
This is absolutely beautiful and from teh heart
some person is very lucky

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I'm sleeping to dream of you and I'm so tired.
:iconblind-prophet:
Yep, its rusty. Need a can of WD-40. THat'd clean it up.

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Interested in taking down that drug-dealing Trix Rabbit? Note me: ~Blind-Prophet

=Hogwarts-Castle <--Cool stuffs.
:iconcoolweirdo:
like wow. I remember why I love to read your poetry. So lovely. Wow. lol, I like it. Darn it! Why'd you write it? I wanted to write something like this for Her.

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"Il mio destino scelgo
Se riesco a resistere"
:iconsalvationforsanity:
But it's something!!

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.

If you don't make a wish... it won't come true.
~Imagination-Inc <---- Go join.
:iconluminesca:
i love it. amazing. ^___^

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'Cause you can't jump the track,we're like cars on a cable
and life's like an hourglass, glued to the table
No one can find the rewind button girl,
So cradle your head in you hands

~Anna Nalick
:iconawesomeali:
It's beautiful! *claps hands*

--
Who's in the forest strolling? The birds and the bees sing Mo-mi-ji! The frogs in the pond are calling...Momiji, yes, it's true. The trees raise their leaves together...Who needs the sun when we've got you?
:icontsuneni2nocis:
That's just tooo sweet, Nikki! :hug: I love it, great job! (And it's not rusty!)

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But I know if I could do it over, I would trade, give away, all the words that I saved in my heart...that I left unspoken.
:iconenola-reverof:
That brought a smile to a lonely old Shadow...

If only that friend was still around, then maybe that Shadow would have something to reflect... but it seems his ill nature chased away such a beautiful poet... and he's left regretting some of the things he said.

He wonders if this friend of his could so easily forget... that even he is not perfect. Yet in the end, he hopes only one thing...

the truth she knew from the time of the dreams.

Beautiful, my dear. I wrote something similer, but I doubt it will last long enough to be brought to... fruitation. It is good to see one of us has gone back to that place... and hopefully, something so beautiful could inspire me.

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"From childhood's hour, I have not seen as other's saw, I have not been as others were, I cannot pull my passion from a common spring." - Edgar Allen Poe
:icongrim1233:
Took your time with a new poem there

Its still amazing and I love it

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Nothing could ever go wrong with a bit of harmless brain eating [link]

:heart:
:iconladyzee1:
I do love your words so very much. You have a style and a flow I never can stop reading. :hug:

Well done, my dear. :clap:

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