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Puzzle, Solution, Answer by ~SalvationForSanity:iconSalvationForSanity:

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~Puzzle,Solution,Answer~
(07-18-05)

I'm seeing something clear today
a different light, a different way
a sigh within my heart and mind
not something I had thought I'd find

The tightness builds, it has no end
I'm waiting for the breath you send
I close my eyes so you can't see
the demons that reside in me

They have no use, their purpose done
My legs feel weak. I can not run
I fall before your eyes today
captured in so many ways

Ensnared, enticed, enrapt... unarmed
hoping not for hurt or harm
What is this? You feel it too.
You're bringing me back home to you

A gentle touch, a soft sweet moan
there is no place that's quite like home
I draw you close so you can see
there -is- a little good in me

This warmth has grown from inside, out
leaving me with little doubt
my eyes are open. I can see.
Thank you, love... for saving me.
©2005-2009 ~SalvationForSanity
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~killinmesoftly:iconkillinmesoftly: Jul 18, 2005, 1:56:58 PM
wow, im breathless! :faint: the rhymes in this are just so original, so great! i love these lines:
"They have no use, their purpose done
My legs feel weak. I can not run
I fall before your eyes today
captured in so many ways"
and...
"What is this? You feel it too.
You're bringing me back home to you

A gentle touch, a soft sweet moan
there is no place that's quite like home
I draw you close so you can see
there -is- a little good in me"
AMAZING!..this is a definate :+favlove:

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And in this moment, I swear, we were infinite.
-The Perks of Being a Wallflower.
~SalvationForSanity:iconSalvationForSanity: Jul 18, 2005, 2:59:02 PM
Hehehehehe. Thank you very much. For both the comments and the :+favlove:

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
~xzumalcken:iconxzumalcken: Jul 18, 2005, 4:13:31 PM
very sweet sanity

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Raven spread your wings, lead the spirits to their home
~CanisLupus7:iconCanisLupus7: Jul 18, 2005, 4:44:15 PM
Very nice

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One should not sacrifice happiness for an uncertain future
~SalvationForSanity:iconSalvationForSanity: Jul 18, 2005, 5:31:48 PM
Thank you.

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
~SalvationForSanity:iconSalvationForSanity: Jul 18, 2005, 5:35:26 PM
Thank you...

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
~Diaster:iconDiaster: Jul 19, 2005, 8:03:47 AM
This is very lovely. And there is a happy ending! YAY! :date:

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"There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind."
-Shel Silverstei
~SalvationForSanity:iconSalvationForSanity: Jul 19, 2005, 9:39:37 AM
-giggles- Thank you! -grins-

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
~MakotoFallen:iconMakotoFallen: Jul 19, 2005, 10:28:32 AM
oh that is so lovely. especially the last lines "thank you, love...for saving me" that's is so touching. just awesome.
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