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~A Word for Makoto~
(08-03-05)

Words can sometimes hurt, you see
but also bring the best to me
Powerful, a silent read
relating all that we could need

A simple greeting brings a grin
laughter as my day begins
Even here a hug means much
virtual, this type of touch

I can bring these words to life
happiness but also strife
Struggling with remaining real
I relate, in words, the way I feel

Sometimes words don't say a thing
it's emotion that we try to bring
Sometimes we fail, and yet we try
even through the tears we cry

We find words that we express
but does it set our heart to rest?
Emotions we were taught to feel
but does it make them truely real?

And so I pour out all these thoughts
a friendship isnt something bought
Your thoughts are warm, I feel you too
And so I give this gift to you

Thank you for the hug and smile
thank you for that extra mile
thank you for the things you do
But thank you MOST, for being you
©2005-2009 ~SalvationForSanity
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this is touching T_T :]]]
Thank you very much! I hope he likes it, too.

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that is toooooooooo nice of you!!!! oh my. i am truly speechless......wow...WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOOWOWOWOO......there's nothing much i can say, really. i think it would be the first time, someone has written somethinng so lovely to me. i am truly thankful and just wow, amazed, at your lovely words. thanks so much. really. lol...i don't know what else tosay...i don't even know what im sayin now...lol....yah, and i got a grin right now too..lol....thanks. hugz :blowkiss::hug:
-grins like an idiot- You're very welcome. I'm very glad you like it!
Whew.
:licking: :hug: :heart:

But really.... Thank YOU

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
lol....ok...lets not get started witht he thank YOU's
Lol Very Nice -nods.- I like it Lol Good job lol and i think mikey likes it -laughs-

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Fookin' Candians. -Support Jark- (Yellowness)
Wow... that's awesome. I wish i could express myself through writing like you do. You're very talented.
LOL!!! ok.

(but thank you....)

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.
LOL! I think so, too. -grins like an idiot some more-

Thank ya! :hug:

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The passionate temptation of the soul sleeps within my eyes.

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